tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2056904125801109005.post71537834273829527..comments2023-11-03T04:24:51.691-04:00Comments on Karen Cino: Hump Day HookKaren Cinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08357416992945729324noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2056904125801109005.post-65580940658980088882012-11-21T23:43:46.022-05:002012-11-21T23:43:46.022-05:00Love how he so easily changes the subject at the e...Love how he so easily changes the subject at the end!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02422942404526720212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2056904125801109005.post-86698210233052878102012-11-21T13:38:31.315-05:002012-11-21T13:38:31.315-05:00I really liked this. A great style to the writing ...I really liked this. A great style to the writing x Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2056904125801109005.post-23953869067761865992012-11-21T10:07:17.324-05:002012-11-21T10:07:17.324-05:00This is well done. I see so many authors just do a...This is well done. I see so many authors just do an info dump with exposition. So much better to have it as dialogue, and this is succinct enough not to be a lecture.Colettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09869756377940254444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2056904125801109005.post-39609562446204278162012-11-21T08:42:54.998-05:002012-11-21T08:42:54.998-05:00Great job. Great job. Lacie Nationhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14223767832962291502noreply@blogger.com