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Hump Day Hook

Welcome to this week's Hump Day Hook.  This excerpt is from my WIP Mystical Wonders - Book 3 - The Right Call.



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“It was.  I was the kid that every team wanted. Not to sound vain, but my quick success, put me on a fast road that I wasn’t ready for at all.”  Scott lifted his knife and cut his meat.  “I went from a half a season in the minor leagues right to the Penguins, where I’ve been their number one pitcher for the past twenty-six years.  But now, my future is in the hands of the upper brass, or shall I say me.”  Scott took a bite of his steak.  He lifted up his knife.  “Awesome.  Go ahead eat.”

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  1. Lacie NationNovember 21, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    Great job.

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  2. ColetteNovember 21, 2012 at 10:07 AM

    This is well done. I see so many authors just do an info dump with exposition. So much better to have it as dialogue, and this is succinct enough not to be a lecture.

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  3. AnonymousNovember 21, 2012 at 1:38 PM

    I really liked this. A great style to the writing x

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  4. UnknownNovember 21, 2012 at 11:43 PM

    Love how he so easily changes the subject at the end!

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