Welcome to this weeks Tuesday Tales to the word prompt Bargain. This is unedited so please excuse the errors. I hope you are enjoying Pia and Lorenzo's story.
Pia’s emotions were flying high. When Lorenzo dropped her off the night before he had been
vague about what was going on in his mind. What decision was he talking about? Maybe he needed to make a decision if
he wanted to be with her?
“Stop,” she yelled covering her eyes with her hands. She had to stop speculating about what
Lorenzo was going to say to her.
Pacing back and forth in her living room, she kept looking
at the clock on the cable box.
Five minutes seemed live five hours. Lorenzo had called earlier saying he would be over by three.
By quarter to three, Pia had been in and out of the bathroom
at least a dozen times. She had no
idea what to expect. But deep down
she had a feeling that things weren’t going to go as she wished them to. Why did she listen to Lisa? She should have told Lorenzo from the
beginning. Now he had to deal with
more than he had bargained for.
When the doorbell rang, her heart dropped. Deep down, she knew her walking papers
were just moments away. She would
never forget the look on his face when Larry called her his wife.
Pia slid the door open. “Hi.”
Lorenzo walked in giving her a quick peck on her cheek. Pia bit her bottom lip as she closed
the front door. She didn’t want to
cry. She’d take the breakup in
stride and wait for him to leave to cry her eyes out.
“Can I get you something?”
“Hmm…water… no.”
Lorenzo sat down on the couch. “If you don’t mind I’d love a cup of
coffee.”
“Not at all. I
already have a pot ready. If you
excuse me for a moment, I’ll be right back.”
Pia felt her eyes water. Lorenzo had a blank look on his face. No emotion at all. He had yet to look her in the eyes. She was no fool. She knew exactly what was coming.
Reaching on her tippy toes, she slid the white serving tray
with flip-flop boarder off the top of the refrigerator. She placed the coffee in a matching thermal
pitcher, along with matching coffee mugs, sugar and a box of bakery cookies. She grabbed the creamer out of the
refrigerator and walked into the living room.
She placed the long rectangular tray on the table. Before sitting down, she poured the
coffee.
“Cookie?” she
asked opening the box.
Lorenzo looked into the box. He patted his stomach as he reached into the box. “You’re killing me with your Italian
cookies. You know they are my
weakness.”
“I know.” She nervously giggled. This was torturous not knowing what he had to tell
her.
Lorenzo lifted his mug, took a sip. “Are you all right?”
“Yes. Why?” she
asked, trying her best to keep her composure.
“Okay,” she shook her head.
“I made some decisions and I didn’t want to leave you
hanging any more than you had to.”
“I appreciate that.”
“Would you like to go out, get a bite to eat? ” He stood. “What do you say?”
“I’d love to.”
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ReplyDeleteGreat post! =)
leaving us hanging- nice writing
ReplyDeleteLove the many times to the bathroom part. I do that when I'm waiting for someone. Made me giggle. Now, about this cliffhanger.....
ReplyDeleteWhat the hell???? I want to know NOW!! Great cliffhanger. But I'm not a patient person.
ReplyDeleteSo how long are you and Lorenzo going to keep us in suspense?
ReplyDeleteGreat details! Good build up of tension. Look forward to finding out what Lorenzo does.
ReplyDeleteGreat cliffhanger, although ... waiting another week? At least she doesn't have to be nervous :-)
ReplyDeleteNow, I want to know what he has to say that warrants a dinner. Maybe this raised her hopes some?
ReplyDeleteOh dam, you left the carrot dangling, I need to know more.
ReplyDeleteYou built the suspense well, I hope we find out more next week.
ReplyDeleteNo...don't leave us hanging! I'm dying to know the decision he had to make. Don't want to wait until next week! Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteYou left me hanging. I am anxious as Pia.
ReplyDeleteLeft us hanging, but I did watch your trailers. Very nice. Did you do those on your own or have a company do them?
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