Welcome to this week's edition of Tuesday Tales to the word prompt Smudge. This is a WIP and is untitled.
Jill followed the blonde haired secretary into the long oval
office. In the center of the room was a long table with only five chairs
occupied. Her eyes immediately
scoped the room until her gaze met Robbie’s, who sat grinning at her.
“Can I get you a cup of coffee, tea or a cold drink?” she
asked.
“No, thank you.”
A tall young man dressed in jeans and shirt and tie, stood.
“Come in Ms. Reed. Please take a seat next to Robbie. I’m Mr. Nelson. But you
can call me Gary. We are informal here.”
Jill shook his hand. “Please, call me Jill.”
“I planned on.”
Jill sat, turning her chair sideways so she could see
everyone sitting at the table. As Gary introduced the producer, director and
head writer, Jill made a mental note to remember each man’s name and title.
In front of each of them were a binder, highlighter, pen and
two pencils. This setup reminded her of meetings when she worked on the soap,
except that she was the one sitting in the head writer seat.
Gary opened spent the next ten minutes telling the staff
about her background and awards she had won through the years. He then
proceeded to ask everyone to open their binder. The first few pages were excerpts of the work she had on the
soap. Gary went into detail about her work and about how he spoke to the
network head that had nothing but wonderful things to say about Jill, causing
her cheeks to heat up.
The door to the office opened and his secretary walked in
with a dish of muffins, placing it in the center of the table between them. She
proceeded to place a coffee mug in front of Jill and filled it with coffee. Jill
looked up to thank her and noticed that her lipstick was smudged on her lips.
Nodding
her head in thanks, Jill poured milk into her mug and held it between her
hands.
“I’d like you to all go to section two.” Gary turned the
plastic covered sheet in his binder before helping himself to a muffin.
Section two consisted of the episode she had written. Robbie
reached over and squeezed her shoulder. Jill let out a nervous giggle when she
saw her name listed as writing the script. Even though she had written
thousands of scenes for the soap, seeing her name as writer of a new series
sent chills down her spine.
“Everyone has had a chance to review the next two episodes
Jill wrote. I’m hoping to get some feedback on the script,” Gary said, breaking
off a piece of muffins and eating it.
“I’m really excited at where the sitcom is going,” Darren,
the head writer said. “Jill took a
pilot episode and created characters that the audience is going to care
about. She took my idea and ran
with it.”
“I like how she was able to develop characters without
seeing the initial character sketches I created,” Blake, the sitcom producer
added. “Jill is going to be a valuable part of the staff.”
“It’s hard to believe that I had the luck to meet her on the
plane. It’s something how luck has
a lot to do with things. “
“Well you found a gem here.” Gary patted Robbie on his shoulder. “You did an excellent
job. I think we are going to have a winner here. Jill?”
“Yes.”
“Would it be possible for you to continue working on the
next few episodes? I’d like to get this back into production in the next few
weeks.”
“Sure. I’ll start working it.”
“Before we do anything, I need for you to go to section four
in your binder where you will find your contract. You will see we offer a comprehensive
package as well as salary. Look it over and have your attorney send it over to
me after you sign.”
“I will. Thank you Gary.”
For the rest of the meeting they talked about the sitcom and
where they wanted to see it go and
determine if there were enough characters to
keep the plot fresh. After working years on the soap, when the characters went
dry, Jill would pull someone from there past out or would create a new
situation, love interest or secret baby. But writing a sitcom, opened up so
much more than the usual drama.
When Gary stood, so did everyone else. “We’ll meet back here next Tuesday at
8:30 AM for a breakfast meeting.
Be prepared to work on episode two. The set designer will also be attending. The pilot only had
three scene changes. I was hoping to get some scenes taking place on location
throughout Manhattan. Jill had
introduced an on location exchange between two of the characters at the park.
So put your thinking caps on and be ready to work.”
Robbie led her out of the office. Once they were alone on the elevator, Jill shouted out,
“Yes.”
“I knew they loved your work.”
“I don’t know how to thank you.”
Robbie grinned. “I can think of a way.”
“Tell me,” she flirted back.
He leaned into her, raised her chin with his thumb and
kissed her lips. “Let me show you
my special place in Manhattan. What
do you say?”
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Argh! What a cliffie! I love it, I do. Can't wait to see next weeks post!
ReplyDeleteI love the insight into how a television show comes about. so many pieces to put together.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Well, except for the opening elevator doors at an inopportune moment. I like the peek into a different segment of the writing world.
ReplyDeleteI love that they like her work so much. AND the flirting in the elevator is awesome.
ReplyDeleteOh, I can't wait to see what happens when the elevator doors open!
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